vox nihili

Thanks. I'm not so good at the punctuation thing, but I'll work on it. :D

Thanks for reviewing! Especially the spelling of anesthesia. I couldn't find it on spell check. I'll be sure to add more details-I usually ham it up with almost poetic descriptions.

Thanks for reviewing. :)

Thanks for reviewing. :) It made me smile reading your comments. I love using words and I love info-thus the reference to the US indianapolis.

Thanks. The title I came up with before I realized that the terrible prompts contest required that heading was Revelation of the Roses. I need some help with poem-punctuation! I ...

Thanks for the critique. I'm going to work on the whole "how his father died," thing.

Thankyou for the warning. I'm sorry you went through that...but i think it's a good thing you posted this. For all of us who are naive.

Wow! The end really takes the reader by surprise. I love the combination of vocabulary. Keep writing. It can get a little confusing in the middle what with all the ...

It's a very dreamy, wistful poem. I'm not exactly sure what happened in it, but you definitely have strong imagery in it. See if you can make the event a ...

Thanks! It wasn't hard to write, b/c i was wired on adrenaline every second. Exciting story=excited writer. They said it was a terrible prompt, but i loved it. Not too ...

"It happened so sudden. Forcing me to move from Sunny-ville, California to Cold Bay, Alaska." You should say 'suddenly' and combine the two sentences with a comma.

When i used the word course, i meant the first course of her meal. Thanks for the comment!

If I was your girlfriend, I'd be touched. It's great that you utilize the use of simple language, but in such a way that it conveys a strong message.

"Slow, careful. Pale white once again; no colour, not now, even the cold metal has gone, left behind. Glass up ahead, sigh, metal again; framing the glass, clear colour streams ...